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I fall so far away
The clouds above my head
Will always stay
Reflected in the rain
That stains the ground
Muddy and forgotten

And in those older days
I think back on them now
And wipe my face
Forgetting all I had
But finding it
So suddenly

Ah, but what a pain
Seems that I fell again
You don't seem to recall
It's worth it all
Oh, tell me gently

I knew you knew the truth
But wanted so much more
Than what was true
I told you what you needed
But I guess reality knew better

The moon, the sky, the stars
Just out of reach and yet so very far
I held your hand as you began
To whisper quietly

I just closed my eyes
Felt you with my mind
I dreamt this park
Was all my heart
Could feel as I drifted
And if my tears are reaching you
The night will take me soon
To some place that
My eyes have never seen
Like a daydream

As sung by Miku-tan: www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGXapR…
I wrote these lyrics months ago, and never liked the way they sounded in my voice, so I gave them to Miku-tan, but I never expected her to actually sing them! So, I'm really happy she did!

Check out her cover here: [link]
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Kaleiyah-P Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for your beautiful transliteration.  Here's my cover as well if you'd like to listen :)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=4LHM5y…
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Kenpach54 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The one I'm listening to is sung by Megurine Luka. I like that one better :3
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Lyrratic Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I did end up covering it after like a year and a half loolol

[link]

your lyrics are amazing, thank you so much!
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Sakeme-Kakumei Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm actually a big fan. Loved muddy cloud, btw. ,,><,,
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FakeTsuki Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG OMG OMG, I heard you sing that.
I thought it was the most beautiful thing I ever heard :3
xDDDDDD
So fuuuuuuny I found you on Youtube before here <3333
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Lyrratic Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
* A* Hello! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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Solixlan-XVII Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haaai! These are SUCH beautiful lyrics (and I really wanna cover this song once I find an off-vocal) IS there any way I can use these in a cover? If you don't want my voice to ruin them that's fine, but I'm Solixlan (or Solixlan Sou depending on what it shows you) On youtube, and I would SOOO much appreciate it!
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Amaepudding Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I need to find a food off vocal version of this song... But it's so hard to find D'x
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XAerifyX Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
I have it. owo
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Amaepudding Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? :'D
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